My Love... My Enemy... by phantom knight

Author: phantom knight

Title: My Love... My Enemy...

Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/ML_ME/

Reviewer: DarkAngel @ Lost Shadows

Title: 4/5

-You could have been more creative with the title, but it fits the story. Just judging by the title, it has an enemy/lover plot. But it catches them off guard because the girl is usually the main in the story with the boy being the aggressive one.


Poster/Background: 10/10

-I really like your poster and background. Ryeowon is really pretty and even seems in character. It reminds me of a movie poster.


Forewords: 5/5

-It included the characters and some information about them, a little preview of the plot that left the reader wanting more, and it was suspenseful (Yes, suspenseful XD). It has pretty much everything that the forewords were supposed to have.


Plot: 14/15

-It’s the usual enemy-into-lover plot where two enemies end up liking each other. But you switched the places and that made the story more interesting. The main boy ended up being the school nerd while the girl was the school bully. You don’t see that often. Kudos for that!


Flow: 10/10

-The flow was fine. It wasn’t too fast and it wasn’t too slow either.


Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 13/15

-There were a few grammar mistakes but they were minor. Your vocabulary is okay also, though you could have added some more words. I didn’t really see any spelling errors.


Characterization: 10/10

-You kind of made Ryeowon a mary-sue, which I don’t usually like. It’s okay for this story since she’s supposed to be aggressive and a bully. Geun Suk is really unique. He’s a loser, but very talented and good-looking, which is hard to find nowadays. I really like the characters and I can see the chemistry between them. Full points!


Originality: 9/10

-Of course, the enemy-lover plot is commonly seen. But you made a huge twist, turning it into a unique and more interesting story. Kudos for that!


Writing style: 10/10

-I don’t really have a problem with your writing. It’s fine just the way it is ^^


Overall enjoyment: 8/10

-It includes some of the usual plots of the other stories, which slightly made me uninterested. Other than that, it was fine!


Overall score: 93/100
*SORRY FOR THE LONG WAIT! I HOPE THIS HELPS!