Story Title: Letting Go
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/SHINeeO1
Reviewer: DarkAngel | lostshadows.co.nr
Title: 5/5
-Just by looking at the title you can judge it's going to be an angst story! It goes along with the story and tells a lot.
Poster/Background: 10/10
-Beautiful poster and beautiful background! It gives off a relaxing vibe. I love it! The poster is so neatly designed, and the colors blend in together really well! It looks peaceful, yet sad at the same time. Reading the text is easy too. Full points!
Forewords: 5/5
-Nice preview! It got me interested and into the mellow mode already. It looks about the right length- not too long and not too short.
Plot: 15/15
-Usually, I wouldn't be reading stories like this. I would just stick to happy or suspenseful ones. This got me interested in the angst genre. I haven't seen an angst fanfic like this before. The plot is slightly different from others. It made me cry while reading it, and I love the song. It's also a nice way to express the feeling and emotions.
Flow: 10/10
-It had a nice flow to it. The pace wasn't too fast, nor too slow. It was just right! The flashback fitted in perfectly.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 15/15
-I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. Your vocabulary was broad enough. You sure do a good job at editing! Either that, or you don't make mistakes when typing.
Characterization: 9/10
-Like I said earlier, you showed the characters' emotions well. Music is a great way to express one's feelings. It's also very popular. However, I was kind of hoping for a different point of view.
Originality: 10/10
-It's as original as it can get. It isn't a complete copy of other plots because you changed things up a bit. How much more different can it get?
Writing style: 9/10
-I don't really like reading huge paragraphs. It looks kind of messy and unorganized, but it's fine. Other than that, the format looks neat enough.
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
-It was pretty good, I admit, but there's something I wished that could have been added. I don't know exactly what it is, but I just have this strange feeling!
Overall score: 97/100
*This is one of the highest scores I have ever given. Be grateful XD LOL Just kidding
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