Dedicated by ctanonymous

Fanfic: Dedicated by ctanonymous
Reviewed by: HidayahF


Title: 4/5
I think the title is too common,,But yeah,the title is related to the story..

Poster/Background: 10/10
The poster and background is really good!I love it!It shows how Hebe is really lonely on the poster..And the background is not too dark.So,readers can read your story clearly.

Forewords: 5/5
It's good.You introduced your characters.It was short but sweet.And it made the readers want to read more.

Plot: 10/15
I've seen plots like this around winglin,but I think this is better!

Flow: 8/10
It's good.But I think it's a bit rush.I'm sure that you can improve more!

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 6/10
I found a few grammar mistakes.But not so much.Everyone makes mistakes right?So as I..

Characterization: 10/10
I think it suits Hebe and Arron.Good job!

Orginality: 8/10
One part of the story is too common.Arron sings a song and he got Hebe back.It's too common.Maybe you can improve better!

Writing style: 5/5
I love your writing style.Good job!Keep it up!!

Overall enjoyment: 6/10
I'm quite enjoy this story.But not too enjoy.Because I'm not a Bebu fan.I'm a GuiLun fan.Sorry if I've offended you.But I'm just telling you the truth.Hope you don't mind.Keep up the good work,girl!

Overall score: 72/100