Labyrinth by TaeMin<3

Story Title : Labyrinth by TaeMin<3
Story URL: winglin.net/fanfic/dark_labyrinth
Reviewed by aZn_sw3in @ lostshadows.co.nr


Title: -/5
Since it was for a challenge i think i shouldn't judge this .


Poster/Background: 9/10
Poster is nice but i was a bit confussed who is Yunni and who is Jin Ah but i could guess who is who after all .
the background is good it matches the title .


Forewords: 3/5
It was a bit short . It would be better if it's longer .


Plot: 15/15
I loved your plot .. i never read a story with this plot before .

Flow: 8/10
I got a bit lost in the ending but then it wasn't that bad as i read it again .


Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 10/10
I think i don't saw any mistakes . Your english is good .

Characterization: 8/10
I could see the personalities of your characters but i wished you had described them more .

Orginality: 10/10
Like i said before never read a story like this before .

Writing style: 5/5
I liked your writing stlye it was so neat and clean . Good job and i think you can improve !

Overall enjoyment: 9/10

I enjoyed your story alot . I was totally in it . I hoped for a happy end xD but the sad ending was great too . You can improve .


Overall score: 92/100
Good job . Keep it up . The next it will be maybe 100/100 =)