On And On by Mickey

Name: Mickey
Story Title : On And On
Story URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/oneandon
Reviewer: azn_sw3in

Title: 1/5
I think the title is uncatchy and what does it have to do with your story ?

Poster/Background: 9/10
I like the poster and the background ^___^

Forewords: 5/5
I totally Love the forewords =) ! Good Job !!

Plot: 10/15
I liked your plot =) but there were some boring actions ...

Flow: 10/10
Your flow was PERFECT ! It wasn't too fast and it wasn't too slow . Keep up the good work

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 9/10
You just did some little mistakes and your English is quite good . =)

Characterization: 10/10
It was perfect ^^ . You showed their character's really good !

Orginality: 8/10
Some parts i've see around here quite often and the ending wasn't that special but good job =)


Writing style: 5/5
I loved your writing style it's neat and neat ! xD
Keep up that writing style =)

Overall enjoyment: 8/10
I quite enjoyed the story but i found it ab it boring . .. in my opinion but i loved the characters =)

Overall score: 75/100