Name: phantom knight
Story Title : Sad Sonata: Realizing Fantasies
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/sad_sonata
Reviewer: aZn_sw3in @ Lostshadows.co.nr
Title: 4.5/5
I like your Title ! It's catchy
Poster/Background: 10/10
Love them <3
Forewords: 3.5 /5
I really liked them but i think there was something missing .
Plot: 15/15
I like your plot ! I've really never seen something like that here before ! ... I was like ... wooha is that really true ?? ... He gave her his number ?? ...but then .. WHAT ??? Such a fantasy !! but i really liked it ... the end was really good ...and emotional
Flow: 7/10
The first part was really to fast @.@ first meeting him .. then the next moment Marriage ?
Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 10/10
I Don't think i've seen mistakes . Good Job =)
Characterization: 10/10
I loved the way you described them !
Orginality: 10/10
like i said before never seen some story like that before.
Writing style: 4/5
It's okay and really neat but i don't know there was something that i didn't liked at all but it isn't that important
Overall enjoyment: 8/10
I really enjoyed your story ^___^
And because there was Donghae in the story and Your Poster & BG is from Lostshadows <3
Overall score: 82/100
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