Need You Now by hellome

Author: hellome

Story Title: Need You Now

Story URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/needyounow

Reviewer: mg6991 | lostshadows.co.nr

Title: 3/5

-Your title was nice but it looks like it’s a common title to me, no offense.

Poster/Background: 9/10

-I LOVE YOUR POSTER. :D

Forewords: 2/5

-Even though it’s a one-shot and your characters are fictional, you should still put on a summary of your story. Your forewords section looks so blank and it shouldn’t be like that. That section gives you an opportunity to introduce your characters and your story well even if your story is a one-shot, a short story or whatever.

Plot: 12/15

-I kind of understand your plot at first but in my opinion, it’s kind of hard to understand. A one-shot is supposed to be like a summary of the whole story. But it looks like you just cutted out some parts of your whole story.

Flow: 8/10

-Your flow was awesome actually. But you just have to sometimes explain some scenes a bit more.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 15/15

-I salute you for your perfect grammar. I sometimes can’t even think words like that.

Characterization: 7/10

-In my opinion, it would have been much better if you gave names to your characters. It gives off a feeling that there’s something missing.

Originality: 10/10

- It’s my first time reading a story like yours. Nice one!

Writing style: 10/10

- I adore how you write. Your writing style is one of the bests that I have seen.

Overall enjoyment: 8/10

Overall score: 84/100

-In my opinion, your writing style is best suited for short stories. But nevertheless, keep up the great work!