Love in School by lovely_smile

Title: Love in School
Story URL: ww.loveinschoolfanfiction.blogspot.com
Author: lovely_smile
Reviewer: DarkAngel @ Lost Shadows




Title: 3/5

-The title isn’t very creative. It’s pretty common, but it fits well with the story. Honestly, I think you could have chosen a better one, but this one is fine.


Poster/Background: 7/10

-There isn’t a poster, but there is a banner (lol, stating the obvious). I like the banner because it’s cute, so I guess it’ll be a seven since you copied the photo from the original drama.


Forewords: 4/5

-It’s nice to know about the characters and their appearance. That way, the reader can imagine what they look like. But it would be better if you put a short summary about what the story is about.


Plot: 12/15

-I like the plot, though it’s common. It’s funny how they always get themselves into a mess every time. It’d be better if you added some kind of twist to it. Still, I like it :)


Flow: 8/10

-I thought it went kind of slow. If you could speed it up a little faster, that would be nice.


Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 12/15

-I spotted a few spelling problems, but it wasn’t anything major. It would be great if you added some better vocabulary. Occasionally, I see repeats too, so try to work on that.


Characterization: 10/10

-I really like your characters! They’re all different from each other, but their bonds are really strong. Though there is a lot of drama going on, they eventually make up.


Originality: 8/10

-Like I said before, this is pretty common, though I can see you try to put your own twist on it.


Writing style: 8/10

-I’m not really fond of the whole script format, but I guess it’s okay. But you describe things really well, so kudos for that.


Overall enjoyment: 8/10

-It’s common, and sometimes predictable. Other than that, I like it ^^


Overall score: 80/100