Time forgets

Title: Time Forgets

Author: RAINxclouds

Reviewer: DarkAngel @ Lost Shadows

Title: 5/5

-It’s simple, but it explains the story a lot. I personally like it because it sounds kind of sad, but that’s just my theory XD

Poster/Background: 8/10

-I really like the poster. I think it looks really nice. But the background is too plain for my liking. When you put them both together, it looks really dark. It would be nicer if there were more colors to it, but I guess it fits the story.

Forewords: 4/5

-I really like the forewords. The little prologue is nice and it makes you think. Very nice! But it would be better if you also added a little introduction about the characters.

Plot: 13/15

-Very good, but it’s kind of common. A girl is sick and dies, leaving the guy alone. Though I thought it was really good, I suppose you could have twisted it a bit more. The story was really deep. Kudos for that.

Flow: 10/10

-The flow was fine. It wasn’t fast or slow. It’s perfect for me!

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 14/15

-Your vocabulary was very good. There were a lot of words that I didn’t know, but I could tell from the context clues. I didn’t spot any spelling problems. For grammar, all you had to do was add a couple of more commas in the right places and it would have been perfect!

Characterization: 9/10

-You mainly focused on Key, which I get, but I suggest you tell the readers more about Hyunae’s personality. The reason why I thought it was deep was because you told us about Key’s feelings. It sounded very realistic and emotional.

Originality: 8/10

-Like I said before, there are many stories with the main person having a disease and then passing away. But this one was a little more unique than others (since others had leukemia, diabetes, heart problems, and things like that).

Writing style: 10/10

-I had no problem with your writing style what so ever! It’s good enough for me!

Overall enjoyment: 10/10

-I really enjoyed it, even though I’m not really a fan of sad or gloomy stories. I almost cried. GREAT JOB!

Overall score: 91/100