She's all that by cutterpillow

Name: cutterpillow
Story Title : She's all that
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/SAT
Reviewer: changminXmc

Title: 4/5
* Hmmm, I really don't know why you chose the title "She's All That" cause I didn't see the connection at all while reading the story. I thought that it would be about a girl who would be "all that." I guess your point was the make us think that? I'm sorry, I just didn't get the connection between the story and the title.

Poster/Background: 9/10
* The poster and background was well made. But something was missing, but I guess it was just me. But besides that, it was really cute and well made. ^^

Forewords: 3/5
* Well, its like you explained half of the plot already in the forward. I'd rather have you write something about the story or something that happened in the middle of the story that may catch a readers attention. The way you wrote your forward was like a summary. Which won't really catch someone attention. So while I was reading, it didn't catch my attention as to wanting to keep on reading.

Plot: 12/15
* Nothing special really catched me on this plot. I've seen a few plot like this out there before that was the same like this.

Flow: 8/10
* At some part, it was like you were rushing a bit. But again, you did keep a steady pace. Which is good, just at some parts, you rush to finish it or try to get to a part too fast.

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 14/15
* I saw a few spelling errors here and there but there not a big deal. Just a few small mistakes. But besides that, your spellings were good.

Characterization: 10/10
* I liked the way you put your characters. You let the person know who its about before reading the story. Which is good, that way people will know who's it about.

Orginality: 7/10
* Like I stated in the plot, I didn't see anything really new with this. I've seen plots the same like this before. Which is pretty predictable for me to know the ending already.

Writing style: 9/10
* Your writing style is a bit different from how I write mines and from others I read but it didn't bother me much. Which I wasn't used to in a way. ^^'

Overall enjoyment: 8/10
* I gotta admit, you made me cry when Haru hurted Ro-chan. I was crying, but at the beginning, it was boring for me. Sorry if I sound harsh or anything but if I was a reader looking for a story to read, I wouldn't have continue to read it. Its also cause I am not a japanese fanfic that much. Hope you're not offended, I do love Japanese but just not some fics. But when you made me cry when Haru hurted her, I then started to like the story. But another thing I don't like is that the ending was really predictable. Which spoils it for me. But keep on writing, you're a good writer. ^^
Overall score: 84/100
　
P.S.
That's a pretty good score. ^^