Love Equilibrium by Naire Perplexity

Name: Naire Perplexity
Story Title : Love Equilibrium
Story URL: www.winglin.net/fanfic/9naire10_4
Reviewer: changminXmc

*** Take note that I have nothing against this author. Just a simple review on helping the writer improve.

Title: 2/5
- I don't know. The title, Love Balance? Eh, I think its ok. Not really good. But I guess it was a ok choice for the story. At first, to tell you the truth, I did not know what EQUILIBRIUM means. But then, I think it was interesting, yet, I don't think it really fits the story.

Poster/Background: 8/10
- The poster looked really pretty. Nice and beautifully done. Along with the background, it was good.

Forewords: 3/5
- Forward, let's see. It was ok. I don't know, not really catching enough. But it didn't reveal the plot.

Plot: 12/15
- Let's see, your plot. I don't think I've seen these kind of plots around, but I know I've seen these plots before in drama's. Kind of interesting when you made Chun and Ella friendship twist up.

Flow: 9/10
- I think your flow was really good yet not perfect. Cause you weren't rushing, nor slow at your pace so its good.

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 13/15
- You had few errors, like you spelled "unto" when its "onto". But I didn't spot that many. Very little.

Characterization: 8/10
- I think your characterization was good.

Orginality: 8/10
- Originality was good, kind of interesting. Though very common.

Writing style: 7/10
- Its really good but I think you need to loosen up a bit. Writing style is a bit too tight and looks like your aiming for a perfect writing style yet it is but too tight. Just loosen up.

Overall enjoyment: 8/10
- At first, I didn't really like the story. But later on, it started getting interesting. The twist, and friendship thing, its really interesting. I enjyoed it but not as much snice I'm not a Tawian fan much. ^^'
Overall score: 78/100