Reset by Susan Lee

Name: Susan Lee
Story Title : Reset
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/suxsan2/
Reviewer: changminXmc


Title: 4/5
* The title was a good choice, but in my opinion, it was too simple. I thought you could've added another word with it without just one word.

Poster/Background: 7/10
* The poster was beautiful, but it feels like its lacking something. Its lacking a feelings for me. But it was a really beautiful poster though. And the background was nice as well.

Forewords: 3/5
* I don't know....it didn't really catch my attention if I was a reader nor as a reviewer. But don't mind me, it was good. Just confusing cause I didn't some of what was happening at some sneak peeks.

Plot: 10/15
* The plot wasn't really new to me. I've seen this plot used around on winglin.

Flow: 9/10
* Your flow was good, there wasn't any rush here or there. A steady pace.

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 14/15
* You had little spelling errors, so it was no big deal. Besides that, you done great!

Characterization: 10/10
* Your casting was great! You listed who was in it, their age, name, and personality. It gives us information on who the casting are and how they are like. ^^

Orginality: 8/10
* It wasn't something new, but I did like that you didn't base it off any movies or other ideas, and changed the plot a bit. Its just that when you brought YooBin back into Suju's life, I've already read something like it so it wasn't so original anymore.

Writing style: 10/10
* Your writing style is really good! While reading it, I could understand it clearly. Keep up the good work!

Overall enjoyment: 6/10
* I did not enjoy reviewing this story or reading it. The story didn't catch my attention. It didn't make me wanting to go back and check for updates. I'm sorry if I sound harsh but I just didn't enjoy it. But you are a good writer, its just, Suju's story aren't much my type even though I like them. xD Hope you don't take it personally, and only to make you improve on your writings.
Overall score: 83/100
　
P.s.
Thats a pretty good score! Keep it up!