Dream On by Choi MinJae © M&Mkwonღ

Name: Choi MinJae © M&Mkwonღ
Story Title : Dream On
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/dream_on
Reviewer: DarkAngel


Title: 5/5

-The title was pretty interesting! It kinda got me into the story a little more, and it matched well with it too. I love it so much! It’s so cute!


Poster/Background: 10/10

-The poster and background was so cute! I love Jiyong’s picture and SooHee’s too! They’re so cute :3 It added a little more feeling to the story, in my opinion- if you know what I mean.


Forewords: 5/5

-I loved how you shared your opinion about eternal love in the foreword and expressed about your feelings (or SooHee’s). After I read your foreword, it got me more excited about the story.


Plot: 14/15

-I love the plot! It was so cute, but yet so sad at the end. Yea, I cried, and that’s a good thing for me! That means that you put effort into writing the story and coming up with the plot. It’s very good and I give you credit for that.


Flow: 9/10

-The flow was all right. Since this was a one-shot, it’s supposed to be kinda fast, but I thought it was also kind of short. Other than that, your flow was pretty good ^_^


Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 14/15

-I saw about one of two mistakes in it, but it wasn’t big ones. I still get what you were trying to say. You could have improved your vocabulary a bit too, but that’s fine.


Characterization: 8/10

-I could tell that SooHee’s afraid that she’s going to get her heart broken eventually, but there were some things that I didn’t really get about the characters. Sure I get that they both liked each other, but I didn’t really understand if her friends was trying to set both of them up. Was JiYong just playing around or did he actually really like her?


Orginality: 9/10

-I don’t really see this story often, but I’ve seen it a couple of times already. But it’s pretty good. I don’t think that you stole anything from anyone else.


Writing style: 10/10

I really don’t have any problem with your writing style. I think it’s perfect just the way it is ^_^

Overall enjoyment: 10/10

-I just love this story so much! It made me cry, which means that it moved me a lot. I love it! :D Good job!


Overall score: 94/100

Good job, you made a high score on it! ^_^