Omo! I’m in love…with my worst enemy by grapestrawberry

Title: Omo! I’m in love…with my worst enemy
Author: grapestrawberry
URL: http://www..winglin.net/fanfic/grapestrawberry/
Reviewer: hanichan32319 @ Lost Shadows

Title: 5/5
It fit your story perfectly! And…it drew my attention immediately. ^^

Poster/Background: 9/10
Okay, you get bonus points for this because purple happens to be one of my favorite colors, plus it matches the feel of the story. I loved the little hearts and whatnot on the poster, and Yunho is always cute, no matter what. Plus, it seems like you did the artwork yourself, and it came out awesome!

Forewords: 3/5
You didn’t give anything away, but you did give a sort of preview. You really didn’t describe the characters, other than their relationships with one another. Why not give their ages and a bit of personality?

Plot: 14/15
Oh God, I think I overdosed on cuteness for the entire story. Yunho may be Leadershii but he always acts like a freaking kid! It’s so adorable! Oh, have you ever read Pride and Prejudice? Because the fact that Yunho annoys the crap out of Shan yet she still loves him reminds me of a cuter and modern Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy. Yeah, I have to read that for English IV…-_- and I actually like it. It’s a neat story. Granted, for my senior year I was expecting something better…whoa, off-topic much. Anyway, it was cute and adorable and I loved it!

Flow: 9/10
Not too fast, and not too slow. Near perfection!

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 14/15
I am so happy that you have good grammar and a bigger vocabulary than some authors on winglin. Of course, there are a few mistakes, but no one’s perfect, right? You did awesome!

Characterization: 9/10
I fell in love with all of your characters! Shan was the typical tomboy trying so hard not to like her enemy; Yunho was adorable yet a little possessive at the same time; Shan was incredibly cute and shy, the perfect best friend; the guest appearances made me smile; and everyone else fit into their roles perfectly. YAY!

Originality: 8/10
There are a few stories out there dealing with someone who falls in love with someone they find annoying at first. Heck, that’s my life story with my current boyfriend (five years this coming April, and from the time I met him in fourth grade, I hated him oh so much. But now we have a stable in relationship…although I still find him annoying sometimes. ^^) But, you made it your own, and for that I applaud you.

Writing style: 9/10
It was clear and precise. You didn’t make my head spin by switching view points every five seconds as other authors tend to do. *If you ever feel the need to do that, I suggest you go for third-person omniscient, meaning that you use “he” or “she” and “they” and give everyone a chance to say their thoughts without having to put a reminder for the readers that the POV is changing.*

Overall enjoyment: 10/10
Aw, I found this story so cute!!! If I could give you a higher score for this part, I’d give you, like, a million or so. I really liked it! Yunho was cute, Shan was cute, and it really didn’t sound like a self-insert fic, if you get what I mean! I found your penname to be cute, and I shall be on the lookout for anymore of your stories! Good luck in the future, and keep writing! You have some amazing talent on your hands! (On a side note, for half the story, because of your title…I had that stupid song that goes, “I’m in love with a stripper…” It kept making me laugh at awkward moments! XD)

Overall Score: 90/100