H.a.r.a.n.g 하랑 [Love Received from God] by baboracoon

Title: H.a.r.a.n.g 하랑 [Love Received from God]
Author: baboracoon
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/baboracoon2/
Reviewed by: hanichan32319 @ Lost Shadows

*So freaking sorry that this took forever and a day to do! >< I was very busy with school (being a senior is not easier, despite what everyone says) and so I had very little time to do much of anything, let alone read your story! Agh, I fell so behind on reviews all around! Sorry!!!*

Title: 5/5
HARANG! Oh, he is just too adorable! When I saw the title, I was like, “Please be about the dog, please be about the dog…” and it was! Holy crap! d(><)b TWO THUMBS WAY, WAY UP on that one!

Poster/Background: 8/10
Your poster was cute, but the background was grey! Grey color schemes are good for no story! It made it seem depressing whereas the content was cute and light.

Forewords: 4/5
Short and simple, and you didn’t give too much away, though your grammar kind of bugged me.

Plot: 14/15
Aww, it was so cute! Dogs arguing amongst themselves about their masters, Yoochun slowly falling for the main character, and all the quirkiness that happened in-between! Ah, who wouldn’t want Park Yoochun to fall in love with them? (God knows I am waiting for him…LOL just kidding) It was different and adorable. YAY!

Flow: 9/10
Nothing was off. Your flow was just fine.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 12/15
You could use more vibrant vocabulary, and you need to work on your grammar. Other than that, I could clearly understand you, and that is always good, =]. Just work on spelling, vocab, and grammar, and you will be an even awesomer writer! (Is that even a word? Awesomer? It is now, XD)

Characterization: 9/10
All your characters clicked together perfectly! It was easy to imagine all the scenarios happening with the reader put in place as the main character. There were no massive holes that needed to be filled. Everyone came out good!

Originality: 10/10
You don’t read too many stories that involve the canines of DBSK. This was much different and a very exciting original piece of work. I especially liked how you included the thoughts of the dogs in the later chapters! That was pretty unique. It reminded me of an old show here in the states (don’t know where you’re from) called The Wild Thornberrys. Yeah, now I feel old…

Writing style: 7/10
PARAGRAPHS: They can be your best friend. Not skipping lines made it a little difficult on my poor eyes (I’m blind as it is…). Everything just kind of jumbled together, and it could possible turn some potential readers off because they don’t want that kind of strain on their eyes. Or maybe I just have really bad eyesight and I’m the only one really bugged by that sort of thing…

Overall enjoyment: 10/10
Adorable times, like, a billion! Little inside joke: while my English class read Pride and Prejudice, our teacher made this signs that read “Aww! Moment” on them, and we held them up every time an “Aww! Moment” happened. In my head, that sign went up a lot of times. I really liked this story! It was original, cute, and fun to read! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! (Sorry for taking my sweet time reviewing it, though) And you cheated. (LMAO, just kidding) I have a major soft spot for Yoochun, and if I read a “You and Park Yoochun” story, I just about lose it.

Overall score: 88/100