Name: tempura
Story Title : A Thousand Paper Cranes
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/tempura/
Reviewer: aZn_sw3in @ lostshadows.co.nr
* Warning : I have nothing against the author and i don't mean to insult the author in anyway I'm just honest .
If i write long comments or short comments it depends on my mood and my English . If i write short ones it's nothing against the author .
Title: 4/5
I like it . It's really matches the story . But it doesn't stand out much .
Poster/Background: -/10
Sorry no points . You don't have a poster or background .
Forewords: 3/5
A little bit short ? but for a one shot it's okay i think .
Plot: 15/15
LOVED IT . Sakura folding 999 paper cranes for 3 whole years just for a wish .
That she want's to move on xD . And when she's almost finished sasuke comes back . Well i wonder if they kissed ?
Flow: 10/10
PERFECT . It wasn't too fast and too slow .Keep up the good work .
Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 10/10
I don't think i saw any mistakes . Good Job =)
Characterization: 8/10
It wasn't that clear but since i knew the naruto characters i had no problem with that .
Orginality: 10/10
I never read something like that before ! Or did i ? i can't remember xD
Writing style: 5/5
I liked it it's neat and clean . but what's with the "1000-1000-1000-1000- .." at the end ? o.o
Overall enjoyment: 10/10
TOTALLY loved it . Well maybe because i just have a Sasuke x Sakura phase at the moment .
Overall score: 85/100
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