Can't Escape by ShadowYin

Can't Escape by ShadowYin
http://winglin.net/fanfic/_shadow
Reviewer: jwyl


Title: 3/5

I thought that the title of the story wasn’t as catchy as the rest of the story.

Poster/Background: 8/10

I just kind of think it’s a bit plain and the poster doesn’t really tell me a story.


Forewords: 5/5

Wow. I really liked your prologue. You wrote it so interesting that I couldn’t take my eyes off. Even though it was simply written, I was still very attracted to it.


Plot: 14/15

I thought that you planned everything quite well. There were a lot of things that made sense and was well explained and written.


Flow: 7/10

At some parts of the story, I found that it went by a bit too quickly. The beginning was going by too quickly. I wasn’t able to get a real sense of the image before you skipped to another scene.


Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 8/10

There weren’t much mistakes in your story. But I was still able to find a few of them every once in a while.


Characterization: 8/10

I wasn’t entirely able to read out what the daemon forms looked like. It didn’t tell me much of how their appearance was.


Orginality: 9/10

I think this story is quite original. Even if it wasn’t, I still thought it was quite exciting. I haven’t read anything like this yet on Winglin.


Writing style: 5/5

I like your style. It’s nice and simple, something that I like.


Overall enjoyment: 9/10


Overall score: 86/100



I really enjoyed reading your story! I was really engrossed into it. I read it until there was no more chapters. When I finished reading all the chapters it made me sad because I wanted to know what happens in the next chapter.