Plea of Remembrance by ixie1504

Autor : ixie1504
Storyname : Plea of Remembrance
Story Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Porkypig2/
Reviewed by aZn_sw3in @ lostshadows.co.nr


Title: 4/5
I doesn't really match your Plot but it's still unique .

Poster/Background: -/10
You don't have a Poster/Background .

Forewords: 5/5
It's short but i really like it through .
I liked The Prologue if you can call it so and the quotes !

Plot: 10/15
I've seen this plot around here a lot .

Flow: 8/10
The flow as okay . Sometimes it was way to fast and then it was to slow sometimes .

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
Your English is very good ! Good Job . I don't think is saw any mistakes .

Characterization: 8/10
You could see the personalities and their emotions you described very good . ^^

Originality: 8/10
Like i said before I've seen this plot around here alot but still there were things i never read before . Good Job .

Writing style: 5/5
I totally loved your writing style . It's very neat! ! Good Job !

Overall enjoyment: 8/10
I didn't enjoyed it at first but later then i was in this story . I Love CHUNELLA ! . Good Job ^^


Overall score: 81/100