Missing You (One Shot) by Sarang_Changmin

Story Title : Missing You (One Shot) by Sarang_Changmin
Story URL: www.winglin.net/fanfic/FoundYou
Reviewer: changminXmc


*** I have nothing against this author/writer.
Title: 3/5
* I've seen this title before, but then, I didn't feel the connection with the story. I guess, it wasn't strong enough to connect with the story.

Poster/Background: 7/10
* I liked the poster, it was cute, and nice, and the background. But it didn't seem to fit the story, maybe not for me.

Forewords: 3/5
* The forward was ok, alittle interesting, but then, I think you could've wrote it more differnetly. For example:

I found out that
I loved the one that was always there by me.

It could've been:

I found out that, the one I love was always there by me.
Or you could've expanded the forward more, with more details.

Plot: 12/15
* I think this plot wasn't anything new to me. I've seen stories like this, so I guess its ok.

Flow: 5/10
* You were rushing through the story. You could've added more details and more scene's to the story. Maybe have some more flashbacks of the girl and Changmin. And you could've had a scene where Minhwan fought Changmin or something, had a little spice in the story. And had some sad parts in the story as well.

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 8/10
* There was parts where you wrote it and it didn't make sense. And you had a few spelling errors, for example, you wrote "Store" when it should've been "stare".

Characterization: 6/10
* I don't know, I didn't like how you organized your character's. I mean, I felt that you could've wrote details or added more details to the characters.

Orginality: 6/10
* I think this story was orginal, simple, and nice. Nothing new, to me, it was like many other stories I've read before.

Writing style: 3/5
* Your writing style is different from other's. Like you would write a big paragraph. But other's, they would write maybe 2 or 3 sentence together and separate. I think you should like separate so it won't be a big paragraph. and it might be easier to read, well, for me. lol.

Overall enjoyment: 8/10
* I enjoyed it alittle. Cause Changminnie was in there, lol, no just kidding. I think this story was ok. A good, simple, and nice fanfiction to read.

Overall score: 61/100

P.S. Don't give out perfect scores. None so far.