You Need An Answer by Mai

You Need An Answer by Mai
http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/mangalover93
reviewer: jwyl


Title: 4/5

I find the title quite unique. If I see it, it kind of makes me want to click on it and find out the ‘answer’.


Poster/Background: 5/10

I’m sorry, but the background is not working for me. In my opinion, I think the background color doesn’t match the poster at all. And the poster seems to be made in a really short period of time. I think the font and color of the letters could have been done a lot better. It might have been a lot better if the designer of the poster stuck with the same colors for the font.


Forewords: 2/5

I found the forward a bit common. I’ve seen stories that have the similar summary as yours. And I found a couple grammar mistakes.


Plot: 11/15

It wasn’t too bad. I thought that the plot was okay… It could have been better.


Flow: 8/10

There were some parts that you were taking it too quickly. Like at the part when Seungri comes home and just suddenly faints. I don’t think that he would have been able to get a high fever that quickly.


Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 5/10

I think you should double check your story before posting it because I was able to find numerous vocabulary/grammar mistakes.


Characterization: 8/10

I was kind of able to understand the character’s personality and such.


Originality: 7/10

I’ve seen a lot of things like this on Winglin.


Writing style: 4/5


Overall enjoyment: 7/10


Overall score: 61/100