P.S. I love you by niXIAH

P.S. I love you by niXIAH
http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/niXIAH/
Reviewed by : changminXmc

*** I have nothing against this author or writer.

Title: 4/5
* I didn't think the title had much to relate to the story. But since the story didn't finish yet, I'm not sure whether you have it for the ending or not. But it wasn't catchy either for readers to read the story.

Poster/Background: 6/10
* I think you should've have a poster with Junsu and a girl on there, any random girl, so that it would've been better. And a background made as well. But the poster now, it was cute, but would've been better with the the main character's in there.

Forewords: 2/5
* I think the forward wasn't interesting, maybe for those who wants to read a story where they can put their name in it but, I felt that you should've had a forward where something had happened, or give a little detail and wrote a scene of what happened.

Plot: 9/15
* I don't think I've seen plots like this, but it does seem similar to others, but I think this plot was ok, nothing special or new to me.

Flow: 7/10
* I saw some parts that were confusing and kinda rushy, but then some parts were not rushy, so I guess your flow was ok.
Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 7/10
* At some point, there were mistakes spelling and some didn't make sense.

Characterization: 5/10
* I think you could've gave more detail on your character's, to make readers know more about them.

Orginality: 7/10
* I think the creativeness of this story was.....ok I guess. It was new/normal to me. So, I guess it didn't really surprise me cause it was really oringinal like you stated.

Writing style: 3/5
* Your writing style is really different from other's writing. Like for example, you would have "***" for thoughts, writer's or author's usually use's '...' for a person thought.

Overall enjoyment: 7/10
* I gave you a 7 out of 10 cause when I reached the part where Yuri was going to do bad things to it, my blood boiled, so yup. I enjoyed it, but not as much as I thought I would. But I think this story is ok, its a good fanfiction. BTW, I loved the Chibi thing for Junsu, that is SO CUTE! lol.
Overall score: 57/100
P.S. I do not give out perfect scores.