Her Simple Peasant by SueWey

Title: Her Simple Peasant

Author: SueWey

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/suewey2

Reviewed by RyoMaXMaSuke@lostshadows



Title: 4/5

- The title does match the story. But it wasn’t eye-catchy or interesting. There are possibilities that people will not click your story and read it.



Poster/Background: 9/10

- The poster gives off a simple and elegant feeling and it matches the story. It was beautifully made. But the background was a little too plain for me.



Forewords: 3/5

- You did a great job in the forewords. Although, when I read the forewords, I didn’t think that the story would be like that. It gave off a whole different story to me. And I think it kinda revealed a little too much of the story.



Plot: 13/15

- Even though the plot is a little cliché, the story was very interesting. Most parts of the story were not seen in other stories.



Flow: 8/10

- Your flow was a little off in some points in the story. But you still kept a nice pace.



Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10

- Your spelling is absolutely okay. I’ve spotted several grammar mistakes and your vocabulary is fine but there’s still room for more.



Characterization: 6/10

- I didn’t get much of there personalities in the story.



Orginality: 8/10

- Although a little cliché, there were definitely a lot of things different in your story.

I like the way that the story was like in the future but it still gave off a feeling of the past. Very Original.



Writing style: 4/5

- It was okay. Your writing style is interesting, neat, and understandble.



Overall enjoyment: 9/10

- I enjoyed your story a lot. But sometimes I was a little confused with the settings of the story. Anyways, I enjoyed it a lot and I am a BIG JaeYumi fan. Good Luck in your next oneshot.


Overall score: 72/100