Foolish Lover- Beyla

Story Title: Foolish Lover
Author: Beyla
URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/beyla_21ss/
Reviewed by: changminXmc@ Lost Shadows

Title: 5/5
* The title was perfect. Had a good meaning for the two who were both blinded by love yet were both foolish. ^^
Poster/Background: 7/10
* I'll have to cut some points off, it would've been better with a bg with your BEAUTIFUL poster. I just love the poster but, I think a bg would've been nice too.
Forewords: 3/5
* Well, the forward wasn't too catchy. Not interesting enough to attract readers. But it was ok.
Plot: 12/15
* The plot is very common for me. I've seen these plots alot out there, so it wasn't any new much.
Flow: 7/10
* The flow wasn't too bad. But I felt that you could've gave alittle bit more for the details. But you stated that there would be only 4 chapters, so I guess its ok.
Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 15/15
* I didn't see any spelling errors, so good for that! ^^
Characterization: 9/10
* The characterization was really normal and nice. It stated who was the cast and such, cause you don't need much information on characters since you'll explain them later in the story.
Orginality: 6/10
* There wasn't really anything new with this story and plot, since I thought it was a simple story.
Writing style: 10/10
* Your writing style is perfect, normal and good. Uh, let's say its perefect haha.
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
* I guess I enjoyed it, not too much though since I could tell the outcome of this story. It was pretty predictable for the ending, and throughout the story. But I enjoyed it alittled bit.
Overall score: 83100
* That's not a bad score there. ^^