Hello Again by Minnie

Name: Minnie
Story Title : Hello Again
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/MinnieO1/
Reviewer: changminXmc


Title: 3/5
* The title wasn't quite fit for the story. It had a way to connect along but, I felt as if there was a better one. Something more...attracting to attract readers/
Poster/Background: 6/10
* The poster wasn't really professional made but it did give off a angst feeling. Though I have to give off for no background. It would've been better.
Forewords: 3/5
* You kept using She or He. Maybe, you could've used different words instead of repeating it over. But the forward was good, just, it was really catchy. Nothing much to attract readers.
Plot: 12/15
* The plot seem really orginal. Nothing new or special for me.
Flow: 6/10
* Your flow was not that good. I felt as if you rushed through the whole chapter. It was as if you were just explaining the plot instead of writing it.
Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 15/15
* I didn't see any spelling errors while I was reviewing this. Godo job. ^^
Characterization: 10/10
* The way you put your characters at the beginning is good. You state who were the cast to let the readers know who it was going to be about.
Orginality: 7/10
* Like I said, the plot wasn't anything too special or new to me. I've seen plots like this before.
Writing style: 10/10
* Your writing style is really nice and neat. Let us readers able to read it without any messiness.
Overall enjoyment: 7/10
* I would've given a lower point but I'll cut you some slack since sad stories are my favorite. But I did not enjoy reviewing it. If I was a reader and came accros this story, I would've stopped already. Not that its bad but nothing caught my eyes to continue on.
Overall score: 79/100