To be selfish - Asian_Innocence

Title: To Be Selfish
Author: Asian_Innocence
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/wtsc/chapter_2.shtml
Reviewer: changminXmc @ Lost Shadows

Title: 4/5
* I wasn't sure whether to give you a 5 out of 5 cause I felt as if the title for that oneshot could've been different. But then again, it related to the oneshot in some way. But like I said, I couldn't get you a 5 cause I felt there was a better title for the oneshot. The story was brutal, cruel, and yes selfish, how Yunho was. So the title was a good choice, just, I felt like there's a better one.
Poster/Background: 10/10
* I'll give you a 10 out of 10 for this one cause the poster and background was utterly beautiful. It was very nice and well made. Though it wasn't the pairing that the oneshot was talking about, I'm ok with it.
Forewords: 3/5
* Sorry, but, I had to take some points off the forward. Although it did state that it would be various of pairings, I just couldn't give you the points. A quick forward before writing the plot would've been ok as well. So that way, we'll know what its about or part of the story.
Plot: 11/15
* Nothing too new or special in this oneshot. It was just mainly about obsession and hurting others. Which is pretty normal.
Flow: 7/10
* I felt as if you wrote too little on the details. As if you rushed through this oneshot. Which was very short but I understand. There should've been more writing on how Yunho treated Jaejoong brutally and cruel. I think there should've been more details to top it all off.
Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 15/15
* I didn't see any spelling errors throughout the oneshot. So to top it all off. PERFECT! XD
Characterization: 10/10
* The cast was very good as well, you told who was the casting of the story, letting us know who it was about. ^^
Orginality: 8/10
* This plot is....I don't know. It was new yet not so amazing. It didn't quite catch me. But, I guess it was new too. Would've been better if you written more.
Writing style: 10/10
* Your writing style is very easy to read, not bunched up or messy. Very neat and nice.
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
* I enjoyed it but, I cut off one point cause it would too short. Sorry, it would've been better if you written a longer one. Since I am a YunJae fan as well. I was expecting more but I didn't since you already told me that it was gonna be a short oneshot when you requested. And a extra comment, "YAH! JUNG YUNHO! HOW CAN YOU HURT JAEJOONG LIKE THAT?! YOU @ASDF!*" Ok, sorry for that, just a comment for the oneshot and story.
Overall score: 87/100
* I consider that a pretty good score. ^^