Its you- uphoria109

Author: uphoria109
Story Title: Its you
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/uphoria109/
Reviewer: changminXmc

*I'm terribly sorry for the long wait! Forgive me! ><

Title: 5/5
* I think the title was really good. It really connected with the story, and its really simple. I like it.

Poster/Background: 8/10
* I thought it would've been a yaoi story since I only saw two guys on the poster. But when I read the story, it had a girl in there, so I thought, Oh, ok, its not yaoi.. But I thought, you could've used a random girl for EunJi. ^^ Though I like how its made, really fits the mood for the story.

Forewords: 4/5
* Your forward was interesting, it didn't give off the whole story plot, and kept alittle angst in it. It was good.

Plot: 13/15
* Your plot is pretty common. A love triangle was is pretty common and it was in this story too. Though it was pretty good.

Flow: 8/10
* I felt as if you rushed the story towards the ending, of where, Kyuhyun and Donghae could've fought over EunJi more and where Kyuhyun still could've try to steal EunJi in the end, but besides that, it was ok. Also, the ending seemed like a rush as well. You could've spent more time on writing a more detailed ending. ^^'

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 13/15
* You had a few spelling errors, and mistakes, but its ok. Since everyone does it. ^^

Characterization: 9/10
* Well, I guess you already told the characters at the beginning, like EunJi, and then Kyuhyun.. Also, Super Junior, but then yeah, eventually reader's would've find out about the characters later on in the story, so it was ok. (Sorry, this wasn't really making sense.)

Orginality: 7/10
* I feel like this story is really original, nothing really new or special. I've seen this kind of plots out there before so yeah, that's why. ^^'

Writing style: 9/10
* Your writing style was perfect, but I think it was still too, like strict. You need to loosen up a bit lol. But it was very good, just a slight difference.

Overall enjoyment: 6/10
* I did not enjoy reviewing this fic, it was rather normal. And each chapter, I did not know who pov was it since you didn't label it. And I'd get really confused sometimes. Sorry to say this, but I didn't really enjoy this. ^^' Though its a good fic.

Overall score: 82/100
* I consider that a pretty good score. ^^