My own rose by rekan

Title: My own rose
Author: rekan
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Rekan/
Reviewer: dramafreak4eva @ Lost Shadows
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Title: 4/5
Your title that you had chosen for you story was suitable for the story but does not catch attention to readers.

Poster/Background: -/10
No poster was provided.

Forewords: 1/5
You had your necessary information and that was it, nothing other than that. No character descriptions, summary, previews or anything. You have to have the things I listed above to get an average mark or above.

Plot: 11/15
There wasn’t an exact plot but what you had was good although it was a bit too short. I didn’t really understand because you didn’t state who’s point of view it was under, all I knew was that it’s about YunJae.

Flow: 8/10
Since it’s short, it was okay. I really can’t say much here.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 13/15
You had used a quite a large range of words. Not too large as your one shot was short and since you weren’t writing a chaptered story, it’s fairly hard to mark your story. The mark I gave you was based on the first chapter.

Characterization: 7/10
You did give some good descriptions on some things but not on the characters so I deducted a few marks because of that.

Originality: 8/10
It’s not all that original but is creative.

Writing style: 8/10
I liked it. It was neat, understandable and readable. Again, your one shot was short so I really can’t mark it.

Overall enjoyment: 6/10

Overall score: 66/90
Once again, it’s short so I really can’t review much. Thanks for requesting at Lost Shadows!