Things Chansung Hates by Jtoasn

Title: Things Chansung Hates

Author: Jtoasn

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/tch/

Reviewer: dramafreak4eva @ Lost Shadows [lostshadows.co.nr]


Title: 2/5

The title wasn’t that appealing and it also did not relate to your story. When I first received the request, I had thought it would be about the things that Chansung hate but unfortunately, it didn’t turned out to be what I had thought.


Poster/Background: -/10

No poster or background was provided.


Forewords: 3/5

The forewords did include all of the necessary information that was needed. The plot summary needed to be clearer though. It was about how Chansung hated.. the smell of Jay, instead you stated that it was about the things that Chansung hated. You needed more detail for readers to show interest in the story.


Plot: 13/15

There wasn’t exactly a plot in the end; but it turned out to be one. It was a very interesting plot to read as you made the shirt and smell link to Jay’s departure. You really did make the story fascinating for readers to keep reading on. Great job.


Flow: 7/10

It was all good until the part where Chansung started to like Jay. Until there, it was a bit rushed. Other than that, it was pretty good overall. There’s nothing much else to say.


Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 15/15

I didn’t find any errors in your grammar or vocabulary.


Characterization: 6/10

I didn’t really understand Chansung and only knew that he hates the smell of Jay and then suddenly likes him and wishes that he didn’t leave 2PM. That’s all I knew about Chansung. You needed to have more background information and details about him. You could’ve at least added a few character descriptions in the forewords.


Orginality: 9/10

It’s original as I haven’t seen any other story like yours, writing like this. I like it.


Writing style: 9/10

Your writing style is very easy to read and understand. I deduced one mark because I felt your oneshot was just way too short.


Overall enjoyment: 9/10



Overall score: 73/90