Trust by ava_lava

Author: ava_lava
Story Title : Trust
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/ava_lava2/
Reviewer: mg6991

Title: 3/5

-Your title was too simple. It can’t attract the eyes of the readers. But nevertheless, it has a connection to your plot.

Poster/Background: 10/10

-I love your poster! It’s nicely done!

Forewords: 3/5

-Your forewords were a bit long. You put only a short summary of your plot and your characters in the Forewords. But it seems that you have already given your readers a small preview.

Plot: 15/15

-I love your plot! It seems like its pretty simple at first sight, but when you read its chapters, it’s actually unique!!

Flow: 8/10

-I can’t understand your flow sometimes. The part where Jae fell in love with Yunho was a bit fast. But there were some parts in where in seems a bit rushed. You should maintain an average pace. Not too fast, not too slow.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 15/15

-You have perfect grammar! Wow! I sometimes don’t get on why you have to use ‘Yah’. But its good.

Characterization: 9/10

-You described Jae and Yunho very well. But it seems that your characterization of Junsu and Yoochun isn’t a bit good. But it’s fine, nevertheless.

Originality: 10/10

-I haven’t seen any stories like yours! Great work!

Writing style: 10/10

-I just love how you write. Keep up the good work!

Overall enjoyment: 8/10

Overall score: 91/100

-That’s pretty high!! Keep doing your best!