Saturday, 12 June 2010

Come Back To Me by grpstrwbrry15

Name: grpstrwbrry15
Story Title: Come Back To Me
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/grpstrwbrry_01/
Reviewer: Airah

Title: 4/5
The title is simple and doesn't really catch my attention but it does fit the story so well.

Poster/Background: 8/10
I like the poster and background because it fits with the atmosphere and adds feelings into it.

Forewords: 5/5

I really like how you put part of the story in the forewords help the readers know what the story is about and that's what hooked me in the story. I like how you didn't include the personalities of the characters or anything about them other than the couple pairings because it helps keeps the story alive by getting the readers know who the characters are by themselves through the story.


Plot: 15/15

I like the plot since its based on a true story. It's very nice.


Flow: 10/10

Perfect. Not too slow nor fast.


Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 14.5/15

I noticed this:

Lucky Kibum-sshi (the landlord) is kind and generous. This is from the letter Jun Hee wrote.


I think that instead of lucky, it should be luckily.


But other than that, your grammar and vocabulary are good.


Characterization: 9.5/10

This is the kind of story where you can't really tell if you got to know the person well especially Junsu because of his problem. Same goes with Jaejoong and Kibum. The others we got to know pretty well.


Originality: 10/10

Very original. Since it is based on a true story and because I have never read something that was based on a true story.


Writing style: 10/10

Very easy and simple to understand.


Overall enjoyment: 10/10

I cried when Junsu came back to normal! I loved it! I love YooSu!


Overall score: 96/100

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