Tik Tok [CCM Challenge] - tubbyGENx3

Author: tubbyGENx3
Story title: Tik Tok [CCM Challenge]
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/challengeOO1/
Reviewer: mg6991

Title: 5/5

- Seeing that you used the song title for the title of your one-shot, I think that it suits your story very well. It is also an unusual title for me which can attract the eye of a reader.

Poster/Background: 10/10

- I just love your poster! I think that it really suits the mood of your story!

Forewords: 3/5

- I think that when it comes in writing something in the Forewords section, you should really put up a short summary of the story and not just a part from the story itself. You should also put up a short description of your characters.

Plot: 11/15

- I have seen a lot of plots like these. It’s a very common plot actually, but you’re one of the authors that have written this plot nicely.

Flow: 9/10

- The flow was nicely done, not too fast, not too draggy. Well done!!

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 14/15

- Although I have seen only a few mistakes, your grammar was alright. But you don’t always have to use a semi-colon.

Characterization: 9/10

- I can really tell the personalities of your characters. Nice work!

Originality: 8/10

- Even though it was a common plot, your style of writing made it unique.

Writing style: 10/10

- Keep up the good work! Your writing style is good!

Overall enjoyment: 7/10

- I’m not really a fan of happy endings but you’re happy ending is one of the bests I have ever seen.

Overall score: 87/100

- Keep doing your best! I can see that your one of the best writers out there!!