Monday, 25 January 2010

A Fangirl's Letter by geesoo

Fanfic Title: A Fangirl's Letter

Author: geesoo

Fanfic Url:http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/02GEE/

Reviewed by : Airah


Title: 5/5
I think that your title really fits the story because it really is about a fangirl's letter. But I don't think its very eye-catching.

Poster/Background: 9.5/10
I love the poster! I think what really got me is the quote. It sort of pulled me and I really want to know what she wrote. I see that your background is plain black but I still think its good. =)

Forewords: 5/5
Your forewords included everything. Though you could have introduced the characters, but since its a one-shot I wouldn't take away any points.

Plot: 15/15
I really like your plot. It has a certain something that other one-shots doesn't have.

Flow: 10/10
Perfectly paced. It wasn't slow nor fast.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 14.5/15
I just notice that you spelled plane wrong you put plan. Everything else looks fine.

Characterization: 10/10
You captured the characters personaility.

Orginality: 10/10
I can truthfully say that I have never read anything like this.

Writing style: 10/10
Doesn't look messy. Easy to understand and very clear.

Overall enjoyment: 10/10
Loved it~!! Thanks for an awesome story~!

Overall score: 99/100

*I knew from the beginning that I wouldn't give you a crappy score!*

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