Sunset Under The Stars by jyyms

Fanfic Title: Sunset Under The Stars

Author: jyyms

Fanfic Url: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/jyyms6/

Reviewer: Airah @ lostshadows.co.nr

Title: 5/5

I think that the title is very unique because all of the titles I see are sometimes to common like Forbidden Love and etc. But this title really fits the story.

Poster/Background: 9/10

I like the poster but the background looked just a little plain. It doesn't really bother the eyes or anything.

Forewords: 5/5

I think that your forewords is really good because you told who the characters are. You didn't ruin the story by telling the plot, instead you wrote a sneak peek. I think that what you wrote will make people read it.

Plot: 15/15

I've read one-shots like this before but this is quite different from the others. I think that this is unique like your title. And I like how the plot really supports the title.


Flow: 10/10

It wasn't slow or fast. Perfectly paced.


Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 15/15

I didn't see a mistake whatsoever.


Characterization: 10/10

I think that you captured their personality. That's why I didn't take any points off.


Originality: 10/10

I think that this is original because I haven't read a SuYin fanfic.

Writing style: 10/10

I like the way you write. Its clear and easy to understand.

Overall enjoyment: 10/10

I loved it.

Overall score: 99/100

*That has got to be one of the highest scores I've given out! Good Luck with your other fanfics!*