Meant To Be... by BigBangLoverr

Name: BigBangLoverr
Story Title : Meant To Be...
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/iheartbigbang02/
Reviewer: jyyms | lostshadows.co.nr

Title: 4/5

The title is suitable for the story up till the current chapters. But I think there needs to a good ending that fits 'Meant To Be..?', right on the spot. Like, TOP and ---ah are finally together.

Poster/Background: 9/10

The poster is cute. I like the little captions on the bottom. The background also suits the story but I wonder what the two cards are for.

Forewords: 5/5

Your forewords was quite good. I like the way you listed the characters. Most readers firstly look at the characters and then continue reading. So it is good that you stated them out.

Plot: 12/15

Your plot is cute. But nooooooo!!!! Yunho died!! He's like one of my favorites!! And I love DBSK. I think your chapters flow along with one another pretty well. I almost cried on the part where the girl cried because dance classes reminded her of Yunho. Awww....that was really sad. And I like it how not all of the Bigbang memebers are in love with the girl. And how TOP is caring for her, despite his playboy personality. But somehow I feel that the plot is a bit simple for a story that's entitled, 'Meant to Be?...'. I would like it if there were more drama and spice.

Flow: 10/10

I like the flow of your story. It is not too fast and not too slow. It is quite steady. I love love love the flow.

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 13/15

I saw some typos but they are not much of a deal. Your grammar is pretty good but I would like it if you used more challenging vocabulary.

Characterization: 9/10

The characters are pretty well described. Even though Yunho appeared in only one chapter, just one chapter, I can clearly imagine how he is like, due to your precise descriptions on how he treats her and the way he acts. And your other characters were well described too. Good job.

Orginality: 8/10

I wouldn't say the story is all original because of the fact that in many stories, playboys usually turn good after meeting the 'good' girl. But I would say it is quite good because she didn't really get everything she wanted. There were the twists and turns. For example, Yunho died. Whereareas, in most stories, the main girl usually ends up with the first guy her heart beats for.

Writing style: 9/10

I like your writing style. It is straight forward, simple and easy to read. I love the way she hurts over Yunho.


Overall enjoyment: 10/10

To be honest, I don't like reading Bigbang narrated stories. And guess what? Yours is the first ever story I enjoyed reading with Bigbang characters. And you put in DBSK bit by bit so i loved it. Great great job. I never liked TOP, no offense but the way you wrote the story made him sound pretty likable. :P Thanks for the story. :)

Please don't take my review as an offensive one. I'm just trying to help. :)

Overall score: 89/100