From Zero To Hero by Vi3tjcn

Title: From Zero To Hero
Author: Vi3tjcn
Url:http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Vi3tjcn3/
Reviewed by: Airah/myangelteuk@lostshadows.co.nr


Title: 2/5- Not a very eye catching title.

Poster/Background: 5/10- I like the poster but the background is pretty plain.

Forewords: 0/5- You didn't put anything that would help the reader except read and find out. I don't think by doing that can get you any readers.

Plot: 13/15- I think that your plot is good even though its pretty obvious.

Flow: 10/10- It wasn't fast or slow.

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 14/15- I just found some minor mistakes so I only took off 1 point.

Characterization: 10/10- I got to know that Jaejoong is a nerd and that Boa is a popular because you put that.

Originality: 10/10- I haven't read anything like this. I think its very original.

Writing style: 10/10- Its good.

Overall enjoyment: 10/10-It was good but I thought it was a whole story because you didn't put one-shot in the title.

Overall score: 84/100

*The score is not that bad you know! Keep on writing!*