Painted Emotions [ Complete A.M Challenge ) by ` hottest s h i n e e vip

Author: ` hottest s h i n e e vip
Story Title : Painted Emotions [ Complete A.M Challenge )
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/mindeejaeeunO3/
Reviewer: DarkAngel | lostshadows.co.nr

Title: 5/5

-Since this is an entry for a challenge that already has a name, it would be unnecessary to deduct points.


Poster/Background: 10/10

-I love your poster. It reminds me of a movie poster. It gives off a mysterious feeling that goes along with the story. The text is easy to read and the background is nice.


Forewords: 5/5

-Your forewords made me want to read your story. The prologue was mysterious and interesting. That’s what I like. It also told us about the characters a little.


Plot: 13/15

-The plot is nice, though you could have done more to the characters after the car crash. Amnesia is common in stories, but it would be more interesting if you would have spiced things up more.


Flow: 8/10

-Everything except when she woke up after the crash was understandable. Shouldn’t she be in the hospital after the accident? Shouldn’t her father be more worried since she just woke up?


Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 15/15

-I couldn’t find any spelling or grammar errors, so that’s good. It would have been better if you placed some bigger words.


Characterization: 9/10

-Your character is different from all of the others that I’ve read. Seo Sungye has an interesting personality. You really explained her personality a lot, so kudos for that. I didn’t catch many things about WonBin though.


Originality: 9/10

-Like I said, the amnesia is a bit common. The ending was NOT the way I expected it to be. It was amazing!


Writing style: 8/10

-Your style wasn’t messy or anything. It’s just I think you should make paragraphs instead of punching ‘enter’ after each sentence. Other than that, I have not problem.


Overall enjoyment: 8/10

-I liked it, but there wasn’t much romance. Also, I’ve read another entry for the story and it was a bit similar to this.


Overall score: 90/100

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